nicely done
it was produced nicely, animation was good, maybe the lined were a bit too zoomed into at times. i was a little confused until i read the blurb, but otherwise good to watch.
nicely done
it was produced nicely, animation was good, maybe the lined were a bit too zoomed into at times. i was a little confused until i read the blurb, but otherwise good to watch.
uh oh
confused beyond belief! sorry not with you on this one
lol
A four
Il give you a 4 because the animation was well done, and must have been lengthy to do. but it lacked a vidual quality, and the dog threw me off a little. otherwise quite nice
Nice in places
This cartoon has a script which is where jerry was great, there was no speaking thats what gave it a great quality. although jerry had a unhappy ending, the whole vibe of this cartoon was a bit too morbid and lowered the wanting to keep watching. i see that cartoons are always great to watch when they are light hearted. but nice work on the art.
nicely done
this was cool, the music though me off a little but your motion capture animation was nicely done in places, its a cool technique. its not everyday you get something that stands out from the others on here, nice job keep going
thanks for that man
slightly odd
you could have produced some of your own backdrops, but your animation has some potential just quite a bit missing thats all
Who weee
Im in on that beast!
awesome/.
Getting somewhere!
this was looking good to start with, your animation within keyframe traditional standards was looking ok, you should hit a ghost in the shell approach by kicking ass with keyframe animation, it looks so much neater than tweens. if this was an episode i must say i was let down, but if this is your intro to the cartoon then its looking good mate, just dont submit until you have a whole episode to blow us away.
what?
not sure what i just watched, although it had a funny concept, it needed much more quality!
Alright, thanks for reviewing.
oh my lord!
NOW THAT WAS FUNNY! but needs more too it! more attention to details would be nice
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